«Cette fois, l'obsession de Claude
entrait en lutte: il regardait opiniâtrement
le visage de cet homme, tentait de distinguer enfin quelque
expression dans la pénombre où
le laissait l'ampoule allumée derrière lui. Forme aussi indistincte
que les feux de la côte
somalie perdus dans l'intensité du clair de lune où
miroitaient les salines (…) Un ton de voix d'une ironie insistante
...» (…) Claude, sentant l'odeur de poussière, de chanvre et de
mouton attachée à ses habits ...»
Friday 14th November. The 10:22 am TGV to Paris. I open my
book, a tattered copy of André Malraux, La Voix Royale, picked up
last night in the second-hand bookshop in the Rue de Verdun. I'm pleased: my newly acquired writer's eye spots Concrete! Specific!
Detailed! I know where Claude is; I can see what Claude can see, I
can hear what Claude can hear and I can even smell what Claude can
smell …
Wednesday 12th November. First meeting of my Writing Class: 6 women
in what looks like an old-fashioned grocery shop, shelves full of
tins of equally old-fashioned English food: Bisto, Oxo cubes,
Colman's mustard. If you look at the ceiling though, way up, the
impression changes: it's the hall of a medieval stronghold, with
thick wooden beams
Tutor Fiona asks us all to write
sentences about red, blue, love, hate, then make a selection. I'm
surprised at what comes out of my pen, some of it pretty good, I
think: evocative, colourful, lively. She spots my wide geographical
background. Well done, Fiona, I've done a lot of travel-blogging.
I love some of the sentences the others
write: Wendy's Cadbury's recollections – suddenly there is
chocolate in the air. If you don't write this book, Wendy, I will!
Fellow student Fiona's writing smells of the garrigue, thyme,
rosemary: Hot sunshine, a local farmhouse, raspberries. It is full
of sounds and voices.
We are also surrounded by sound in this
unusual location: outside kids are rapping and it's not until I leave
that I notice we are next to Antirouille, a place I have only seen on
posters so far. I liked the name, but had no idea where it was. Now I
know. If my writing progresses, I might take some of it next door and
rap it. They'll hate it, but who cares?
Lovely to read this. Especially since I hadn't even thought about our surroundings! Hurrah for the rappers.
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